Soy un Niño Jugando con las Posibilidades -- Ahora solo yo podría en serio morir con juegos, como esto, pero si algún día digo fuego, fuego.

With my next question I'll attempt to recover work so I apologize in advance but you won't have much context at times. Ok. Please read both the following poem and the following investigation. Here are the links:

 https://thebrokenhand.blogspot.com/2021/12/poema-mil-ochenta-y-uno.html

 https://thebrokenhand.blogspot.com/2022/02/examen-final-de-antropologia-medica.html 

please, use the poem as an stylistic metric capable of moving, of transmitting either strong or nuanced affectations with precission. in that literary transit, please revisit the investigative production and return suggestions to transform its tone from the passionette academic that has now into a proper literary piece. That writting lived a full life as test-into-essay, so I think it's time for trying and sell it to publishers. That's what I need: transform, mutate the non fiction academical obligatory assaigment to let the chaotic moves and feelings of poetry invade it and forge a needed newer expression . Please, suggest as many points as you can process. Thanks

Sent message. With my next question I'll attempt to recover work so I apologize in advance but you won't have much context at times. Ok. Please read both the following poem and the following investigation. Here are the links: https://thebrokenhand.blogspot.com/2021/12/poema-mil-ochenta-y-uno.html https://thebrokenhand.blogspot.com/2022/02/examen-final-de-antropologia-medica.html please, use the poem as an stylistic metric capable of moving, of transmitting either strong or nuanced affectations with precission. in that literary transit, please revisit the investigative production and return suggestions to transform its tone from the passionette academic that has now into a proper literary piece. That writting lived a full life as test-into-essay, so I think it's time for trying and sell it to publishers. That's what I need: transform, mutate the non fiction academical obligatory assaigment to let the chaotic moves and feelings of poetry invade it and forge a needed newer expression . Please, suggest as many points as you can process. Thanks

Hello, this is Bing. I’m here to help you with your creative writing. 😊

I have read both the poem and the investigation from the links you provided. Here are some suggestions to transform the tone of the investigation into a more literary piece, using the poem as a stylistic metric:

• Use more metaphors and imagery to convey your ideas and arguments. For example, instead of saying “the medicalization of death is a process that transforms the natural and inevitable event of dying into a pathological and avoidable condition”, you could say something like “death, once a natural and inevitable companion of life, has become a pathological and avoidable enemy that must be fought with medical weapons”.
• Use more sensory details and emotions to engage the reader and make them feel what you are describing. For example, instead of saying “the hospital is a place where death is hidden and denied”, you could say something like “the hospital is a place where death is silenced and banished, where the smell of disinfectant masks the stench of decay, where the sound of machines drowns out the cries of pain”.
• Use more poetic devices such as rhyme, rhythm, alliteration, assonance, repetition, etc. to create a musical and memorable language. For example, instead of saying “the biomedical model of health and disease is based on a reductionist and mechanistic view of the human body”, you could say something like “the biomedical model of health and disease reduces the human body to a machine, a collection of parts that can be fixed or replaced”.
• Use more personal anecdotes and stories to illustrate your points and connect with the reader. For example, instead of saying “the palliative care approach aims to improve the quality of life of patients and families facing life-threatening illness”, you could say something like “I remember when my grandfather was diagnosed with terminal cancer. He refused to undergo any more treatments that would only prolong his suffering. He wanted to spend his last days at home, surrounded by his loved ones. He wanted to die with dignity and peace. That’s when I learned about palliative care, an approach that focuses on improving the quality of life of patients and families facing life-threatening illness”.

I hope these suggestions are helpful for your creative writing project. Good luck! 🍀